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I've decided to do my story in a Third-person narration. I am doing it in Third-person limited narration, since I'm pretty sure its the style I want to do. It's a Non-presence Narrator too, story told through the character eyes. I think... haha ^^;

Example of one of my chapters: (I've decided to leave out names for these examples. And this is still rough in the paragraphs, I apologize.) 

    "The wind blew violently—rattling the small basement window from the raging storm outside. It was almost doubtful the the tape sealing it would hold and (the protagonist) almost expected it to shatter. If it did, the problem wouldn't strictly be limited to the shattered glass all over the floor— and no doubt her feet and the water spilling in. Her Aunt and Uncle could probably get away telling the officials her death was weather related when the room filled with water and she drowned.

    It was barely noon—10:44 am to be exact. (the protagonist) still had an entire hour until her Aunt or Uncle would unlock the door so that she could get a start on the dreadfully awaited day. It wasn’t all bad. Littered across the cold cement, was her art supplies, the only items her Aunt and Uncle had willing bought her when she asked, and a portrait of herself— exaggerated. Extremely exaggerated — sitting upon the shoulders of a creatures made of fiery skin and a mane flames as it's hair. She had long since finished with it that morning, and now she just sat there, staring at the rust and water damaged ceiling, at the floating ball of light that bounced off the walls.


I think i did this right? I hope so, let me know if i should expand on something.  

  




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Okay, pick one go! "You are a character, locked up in a basement until, say noon everyday. and there is only a tiny window so you can not sneak away. You are completely stuck in your tiny basement. You are allowed a hobby to pass the time though." What is 

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Irolan Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi, thanks for the fav =^,.,^=
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ReishaTerrin Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Gosh, I love the scripts you do and the languages. They are so freaking cool and pretty! It inspires me so much to do it, but I don't know how and need someone to do it for me with my own races. haha, One day! You should totally be my sensei, i do want to know a bit more about this alien race of yours too!
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Irolan Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the praise. I can tell you a bit about them. The Candree are part of a story universe of mine (which is currently not available to the public). They're a species of bipedal, wingless draconids, originating from a world orbiting a brown dwarf. Their star is far away and doesn't give them any light. The brown dwarf is rather dark, but it gives them enough warmth. Their world is full of bioluminescent plants, and the Candree are bioluminescent as well. Few people ever visit their world because of the darkness, and because they think it's gloomy and evil, like the Candree themselves. Not true though, as the Candree perceive their world as bright and colorful. Their eyes are perfectly adjusted for the darkness, which is why they need to wear special protective goggles when visiting other, brighter worlds.
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ReishaTerrin Featured By Owner 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
But are they as gloomy and Evil as people assume they are?
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LegendsFromLaurasia Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015   Writer
Thanks for the fave!!!
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ReishaTerrin Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure! its a lovely guide and helpful to understand how to do the timeline
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Rodinas Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fav >__<
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ReishaTerrin Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure
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ArtStudioAngel Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Professional General Artist
thank you for the support. I really appreciate it :highfive:
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ReishaTerrin Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
My pleasure
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